As soon as I decided to redraw the art I saw all sorts of things that needed fixing. Maura’s face was too narrow, eyes too big, collar bone in the wrong place. I set about fixing these problems and decided to use a heavier paper as well. I snipped a piece of Fabriano watercolor paper out of my stash and found that it had too much texture. It’s not too bad and I did get much better blacks, but the over all look is a bit fuzzy.